I like the idea of the story. Alpha males are my favorites but this story kind of fell flat. I did liked that the heroine Rachael wasn't a doormat. Even though Sebastian the hero did start out to be a jerk he did change quickly into a nice guy. There just wasn't much substance. It was a basic story. Rachel's mother was a gold digger and fast. She used Sebastian's Uncle and caused his death. Even though he never had a reason to think Rachael was like her knowing her for years he still painted her with the same brush. After spending one night with her and saying hurtful things Rachael disappears. He realizes he made a mistake and the story goes from there.